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Topic Sentence
Student sample
In modern times, local residents seem disinterested in visiting historical sites
and museums in their vicinity compared to tourists because they have become
familiar with these sites and the history is a part of their identity and
background. However, these sites are places of interest and adventure to
tourists and foreigners who have little or no knowledge about the history of
the town, so it is only natural for the museums and historical sites to hold
more appeal for them and be visited so as to learn more about the culture of
the people of that town.
Examiner Feedback- No clear central topic because multiple main ideas in topic
sentence.
Advice- Pick one main idea and fully develop that main idea.
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