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Topic Sentence
Student sample
Obviously, people seem to know all about an area in which they bring up. They
grow while exploring their surroundings, listening stories from their elders,
and reading and studying literature of their native regions. So, being
contented, they find such archives or chronicle areas as vapid and always keep
aspiring to explore something different. For instance, People from all over the
world show keen interest in visiting historical monument, Taj Mahal, one of the
seven wonders of the world, that is in Agra. But, localites here hardly visit to
this mausoleum and moreover often involve in activities which spoils the
beauty of the place or the monument.
Examiner Feedback- No clear topic sentence making it difficult to understand if
response addresses the question or not.
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