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measures to prevent 
children from becoming overweight [body 2].
 
There are 
compelling reasons
behind increased obesity levels among 
minors. One obvious factor contributing to this problem is that… 
 
Nevertheless, I can propose feasible solutions to this public nuisance.

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However, there are feasible ways 
in which
this problem can be dealt 
with. The first solution is to impose a ban on the sale of fast food 
products.
Home-schooling has clear benefits.
 
6.0-has a mix of 
simple and complex structures 
7.0-has a variety of complex structures 
8.0-has 
a wide range of structures
[simple/complex] 
 
 There are several benefits to studying overseas.

There are obvious advantages to… 
Something has distinct disadvantages. 
 
There are clear reasons for/behind…. 
There are feasible ways in which this problem can be dealt with.
Governments can generate viable solutions to this problem. 
 
Advantages-There are obvious benefits to something. 
Disadvantages-Something has potential drawbacks. 
Reasons-There are clear reasons for something. 
Solutions-There are viable solutions to something. 
Effects-Something cancause posittive/negative effects.
 
There are clear benefits to something.