Topic sentences

These days more and more people want to be famous. What are the advantages and 
disadvantages of being famous? 
 
In the hope of becoming more well-liked and wealthy,
 
many people, in particular teenagers, 
aspire to gain fame.
 
While being an eminent personality is likely to yield financial and 
personal benefits, its mental and physiological ramifications should not be overlooked, I 
think. 
Undeniably, being a celebrity can be highly advantageous. 
For a start, [first benefit].
[explanation].
[second benefit].
[explanation].
That being said, fame usually comes at a high cost.
Firstly, [first drawback]. 
[explanation]
.
[second drawback].
[explanation]
How to select ideas 
 
Studying abroad.
 
Expensive contracts 
Expensive flights 
High cost of living 
 
Financial difficulties 
 
Miss their family members 
Culture shock 
Miss their own traditions and local practices 
Having difficulty in adapting to a new society 
 
Mental problems 
 
Depression
Emotional support 
 
 

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Home-schooling
 
Home education has gained in popularity in recent times, with many 
parents choosing it in preference to public/traditional education. In my 
view, home-schooling can not only provide increased safety and 
improved parent-child interaction, but also result in a child’s poor 
academic and social development.
 
No bullying
No kidnapping 
No accidents 
No harrassment 
No racism or social discrimination
No abuse [INCREASED SAFETY] 
 
Parents spend more time with children 
They can build better trust and understanding with their offspring. 
[IMPROVED PARENT-CHILD INTERACTION] 
 
No interaction with their peers 
Early isolation and allienation
No fun with their peers [POOR SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT] 
 
No proffesional approach 
Parents cannot have expert knowldege in every subject, especially 
modern subjects like science and technology 
No proper teaching techniques [POOR ACADEMIC DEVELOPMENT]