Topic sentences

Increased job competition 
 
Artificial intelligence/autonomation-robots 
Unemployment and poverty 
The job market has been hyper competitive-industry requirements-work 
overtime-show better productivity than others-prioritize their job 

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responsibilities over parental commitments-no enough time for children-
overly stressed and exhausted. 
 
 
TOPIC SENTENCES.
 
Introduction-paraphrasing+position sentence. 
 
Body 
1-Topic 
sentence+1-idea+explanation+extension+2-
idea+explanation+extension+body conclusion. 
 
Home education has gained in popularity in recent times, with many 
parents choosing it in preference to public/traditional education. In my 
view, home-schooling can not only provide increased safety and 
improved parent-child interaction [body 1], but also result in a child’s 
poor academic and social development [body 2].
 
There are obvious benefits to home-schooling. First, it can…… 
[explanation]….[extension]. 
Second, 
home 
education 
may…[explanation]…[extension]…[body conclusion]. 
 
Nevertheless, home education has potential drawbacks. For a start, 
…..[explanation] extension. Furthermore, … 
 
 
 
Nowadays, the obesity rate is soaring in many countries. In my view, 
a 
lack of physical activity
and 
poor diet
drive this issue[body 1], but the 
government and parents can undertake several