Topic sentences

 
Some young people now prefer to study abroad. What are the advantages and 
disadvantages of this experience for them? 
 
With the advent of international study exchange programs,
increasingly more youngsters 
have been opting to study overseas. 
While this type of experience is likely to yield academic 
and personal benefits, it might cause financial and mental repercussions. 
There are several advantages to studying overseas. 
For a start, this practice can give students 
the higher chances of broadening their knowledge and gaining in valuable skills. 
This is 
because foreign countries, especially in Europe and America, have a lot of prestigious 
universities and public schools that hire highly qualified teachers and experts, teaching 
students more effectively. 
Furthermore, the experience of living abroad is likely to allow 
young people to build up their independence and self-confidence.
Because, when studying 
abroad, they are supposed to do everything on their own, from paying bills to performing 
household chores.
More and more countries developing their tourism. Is this a positive or negative 
development? Both positive and negative. 
 
Through a remarkable portion of their public budgets
, many governments have been 
enhancing their touristic opportunities. 
I think this development can produce several 
beneficial effects, as well as potential drawbacks. 
Undoubtedly, tourism can yield various benefits. 
First, [first benefit]. 
[Explanation].
Second, 
[second benefit].
[Explanation].
Nevertheless, developing this industry is not without its problems. 
To begin with, [first 
drawback]. 
[Explanation]. 
On top of that, [second drawback].
[Explanation]. 

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