Ielts essay Clinic Targeted Feedback pdf 2 Your Main Body Paragraphs

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Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals. What can be done to get locals to visit museums
Targeted Feedback 3 It helps students focus on their key mistakes and identify their main weaknesses. Targeted feedback focuses
We do this by looking at a series of simple statements and then analysing our own work. ✔ We will also look at a range of samples.

IELTS Essay Clinic
Targeted Feedback PDF 2
Your Main Body Paragraphs
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Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly
visited by foreign tourists instead of locals.
What can be done to get locals to visit museums
and historical sites more?
Why is this happening?
Look at the question below. Follow the steps
outlined in this lesson and write a main body
paragraph for the ﬁrst question.
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Use the checklist to analyse the student
samples.

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Targeted Feedback
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It helps students focus on their
key mistakes and identify their
main weaknesses.
Targeted feedback focuses
on a small number of
targeted areas.
It also helps students help
themselves and improve their
own weaknesses.
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All rights reserved

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rights reserved
✔
We do this by looking at a series of simple
statements and then analysing our own work.
✔
We will also look at a range of samples.
✔
Use the statements and samples to evaluate
your own work.
Targeted Feedback
4
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